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Mr. Pony
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I will never forget my first sexual experience and I'm going to tell you about it right now.
by Mr. Pony
I will never forget my first sexual experience and I'm going to tell you about it right now. It was in the school library, with Miss Kindler. I was returning a library book and she was taking it from me and stamping it "returned" and then our hands touched. My dark and mysterious bedroom eyes locked glances with her eyes and we fell for each other almost instantly.
She hauled me into the library book sorting room and caressed my bulging, steaming righteous cock bulge while I looked at her boobs. Next, we took off all our clothes and she used her finger to stroke my eager length of quaking mantube, pulling the sheath of my dick-cloak across my forelog again and again until the whole structure seemed almost literally ready to burst at the seams. While she did that I put my hand near, and then on her vagina. As she whispered stuff at me I implied to her that there had been an atomic war and that we had to really have sex in order to repopulate the Human species, and I knew the deal was sealed.
With my hand I touched her butt as she took my voluminous steam engine-shaped battering hog into her vagina. Almost instantly, a thunderous flood of my Milk of Gods burst forth from my trembling electric love orchestra, spilling out into the sorting carts and forever sealing up volumes of Humanity's greatest works forever. Miss Kindler let out a small noise as some of my unstoppable torrential seedly flood landed also on her vagina. I raised my massive arms and bellowed like a water buffalo. Standing up on a sorting cart, my hulking dreadnought rained down Armageddon onto the unsuspecting floor.
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R. Rivere
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Mr. Pony,
You don't write so well, but your story was pretty funny. I saw the last post had a link to acme shorts. I went to acme and saw you as a member. I also noticed another writer from acme shorts on the homepage. Is there some kind of deal you have struck with Projectedletters?
I like Projected Letters a lot (I don;t think I'll post on acme--it looks too brutal). Maybe Projected Letters should build a fiction workshop as an alternative to the kind of nastiness on acme. It's good to see the editor is finally involved on his own forum.
Are we going to get more stories in this area? Maybe it's discouraged because the "real" content is on the site.
BTW I like the idea of the Idealism & Realism section.
Maybe I will submit something to the magazine. Or if it's no good, I'll put it up here for comments.
I'll give a thumb half up for thsi story. Mr. Pony has some good lines. There IS something adolescent about the writing, which I guess is the point.
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Mr. Pony
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Thank you, R!! It is true that there is a great deal of honesty on Acme that may seem a brutal to some who don't want to be criticized very much. Anyway, many of the Acme regulars have departed for Parts Unknown, so this point may be MOOT!! Acme is an empty site with fiction workshop tools that is ripe for takeover by the PL community, IMH opinion. That said, this forum is a perfectly swell place to post stuff too!! I hope to see everyone posting here!
Mr. Pony
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madox g.m.
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Does no one but me think that these people who all want to tell you about their first sexual experience are perfectly boring? Or is this ungoodthinking, unspeak, doubleungoodcritic, whatever?
I guess "acme" is the place where they have virtual sex together. Fine. It has obviously been a long time since they tried the real thing - if ever.
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Mr. Pony
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Hi, Madox G. M.!
Thank you for your comments! I'm sorry that you didn't understand that this was a work of Fiction. I actually thought that this might be a problem with certain members of the forum might make this same mistake, so I posted the story in "Fiction Workshop". Hope this helps! Anyway, sometimes in fiction, a writer (me) will write something from the point of view of a character--sometimes a person completely different from the guy writing! (me!) I myself am new to writing, and I am not sure if this a new development in the craft of Fiction; but I assure you! People do it!
By the way, I thought your references to the now-classic 1983 book were cool! Double-plus AWESOME!!
You are right about one thing. It has been a couple of days since I "made it" (as you put it). <-LOSER!! (I'm pointing at myself 
Anyway, I'm glad you liked my story! I always welcome comments on my Fiction!
Thanks,
Mr. Pony
P.S. What is Virtual Sex??
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Mr. Pony
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My typo winked! This site is great!
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madox g.m.
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Hullo Mr Pony!
I like your answer immensely. You HAVE a good sense of humour.
Thanks for your definition of FICTION work. I had indeed some notion that this was indeed FICTION, I just wondered HOW such a creation could in any way be classified as a LITERARY work, or opus, or whatever. Well... perhaps, quite a lot of men phantasize about their first S. experience. And of course Miss Kindler could have a name in my own phantasy. Call her Alice if you will.
You don't write so bad. I mean you write rather well, and I suggest you like playing the provocateur. So do I. Oh. Virtual Sex is pretending you're jacking off before your computer screen while you are just drinking lukewarm pils (the cooler came out of order) .
Cheers!
MGM
P.S. By the way, Orwell's book is 1984 not 1983 because he wrote it thinking of 1948. Did you read Burgess' 1985? I think we are LIVING it.
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